HELP!

So, I wrote my half-meta thingy on fanfiction for my Creative Non-Fiction class and I need opinions! Its due tomorrow (Sunday) at midnight so if anyone can PLEASE get back to me before then I'd really appreciate it!

- Does it end well?
- Is there anything you think I could add?
- Is there anything you think I should/could drop?
- Spelling/grammar check FTW!
- TITLE IDEAS?

( Two and a couple pages of fanfiction growth )

New VIDEO

So, ya'll remember me saying I was going to do a DT video to Papa Don't Preach? I got it done!